Here's the link to the finished documentary. I personally have a hard time watching back my own stuff because I always think there is something to improve. However, when in class, we all critiqued each others' and I loved hearing feedback from people other than my partner. It gave us a new perspective as to how we could improve. They told us they loved the structure, they did see a couple of jump cuts, and that we were missing the lower thirds. Like those were the main three points discussed. I agree, reluctantly, I watched it and noticed the rough cuts, and let me tell you they were a bit jarring. I'm not the biggest fan of the structure, I would have loved to have the three subjects and have them weave in and out of each other's statements. But to be honest, this works too. Especially given the circumstances. AND YES. I did notice the lower thirds were missing, but there was no time to resubmit.
Anyways, I hope you enjoy!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1DL_GL2JXIj78xQxcYEddoOZw3eLsRGjJ/view?usp=sharing
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